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Re: Last War
i do have to say that its a good start but you need to space it out between each new person speaking. also i would reccomend the replacement of what ...
Sep 14, 2007 -
Re: THE BLUE KING - CHAPTER FOURTEEN AND FIFTEEN
i agree it is very well written. detailed enough though has flow, a nicely developed plot and a good set of strong characters. but of course the thing i like ...
Sep 14, 2007 -
Re: Star Ranking System by Reviews
silver motivates me quite well and this is perfect concidering im only going to edit stuff from now on because i am an intern assistant for an editor at TOR ...
Sep 6, 2007 -
Re: Iraq
this is not non fiction please replace to a non literary forum thread regarding such topics
Sep 5, 2007 -
Re: Driving and utilizing the cell phone simultaneously.
this is not other fiction please replace to a non literary forum thread regarding such topics
Sep 5, 2007 -
Re: Africa.
this is not non fiction please replace to a non literary forum thread regarding such topics
Sep 5, 2007 -
Re: Randomnessssssssssssss
...that um...well was...potent... I myself am a child of devorced parents, and have dealt with their court case for 6 and a half years now... so this, which as suggested ...
Sep 5, 2007 -
Re: Running from 'wolves' (More understandable...I think)
(new Version) Baek awoke in his bed...yet again. sighing he sat up only to feel a searing burst of pain and fall backwards twisting and writhing, tangling the bedding underneath ...
Jun 11, 2007 -
Re: Running from wolves.
QUESTION. 1. Is it possible to fall off the edge of the earth? (completly discredit this if you please) 2. is that baby supposed to be Baek? thanks and im ...
Jun 6, 2007 -
Re: A scene from my book: Clan blood: EDITED AND ADDED
im taking this down along with all my other blooded work specificall because i am ree writng most of it agian and would not be bothered by more coments than ...
May 24, 2007 -
Re: A scene from my book: Clan blood
im taking this down along with all my other blooded work specificall because i am ree writng most of it agian and would not be bothered by more coments than ...
May 24, 2007 -
Re: Clan Blood Sene section two
im taking this down along with all my other blooded work specificall because i am ree writng most of it agian and would not be bothered by more coments than ...
May 24, 2007 -
Re: Blooded - ver. 1.7
im taking this down along with all my other blooded work specificall because i am ree writng most of it agian and would not be bothered by more coments than ...
May 24, 2007 -
Re: Blooded Ch. 1 - Slightly edited (still a work in progress)
im taking this down along with all my other blooded work specificall because i am ree writng most of it agian and would not be bothered by more coments than ...
May 24, 2007 -
Re: Firya Prologue
just realized we got currently 714 points each at the moment i finished that last post!
May 16, 2007